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Freedom (Water)

Writer's picture: Isabelle BarsenbachIsabelle Barsenbach

Here's my second piece written while in Antalya. The first piece 'Trapped (Golden Palace)' is about feeling trapped, but ends discussing the feeling of freedom. This piece focuses on freedom, with a shift towards feeling trapped at the end.


Lying on the beach, looking out at the sea

Waves rolling in gently

Sun to my right, high in the sky

Warming my cheek and arm

Creates a golden path on the sea

The reflection shimmering, enticing me

If I look, I’m momentarily blinded


You gaze out, and it’s just

Sea and sky

Dark blue and light blue

How far does it stretch?

Millions of ripples, yet sometimes glassy still

Reflective, yet destructive


Once in, it’s a different feeling

Free as a bird to dip and dive

Splash about in the shallows,

Lie on your back, close your eyes and feel the sun cover your face in gentle kisses

Or wade into the deep

Alone, at one with yourself, your thoughts, your being


But it’s also strong,

It lulls you into a false sense of security

You feel safe in its gentle arms

Then, when you’re far away from shore, from people, from safety,

It moves you against your will

Those strong arms push you further and further out, when all you long for are the soft sands of safety


It engulfs you, surrounds you

It’s powerful, yet intimate

Seeps into every nook and cranny

Covers your whole body

Gets under your swimming costume

Skin-tight

To places only you know all about

Slithers round without your permission

Wrapping tighter and tighter until

You’re trapped; it’s everywhere, all over and under and round you

Yet somehow, it feels right.


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